✔ 最佳答案
如果係對話就口語少少喇﹕
My name is xxx, and I am 20 years old. After I completed Form 5 in 2004, I proceeded to taking cosmetic courses. When I was taking those courses, I also worked as a part time in xx Company. After I completed the cosmetic courses in 2005, I worked as a salesperson for cosmetic products. Afterall, I felt that I needed improvement in my English skills, so I took English classes and worked at the same time.
I resigned as a beauty therapist (要根據你工作性質黎譯) in June 2007. I wished to continue taking other courses to improve my other skills, such as mandarin, marketing, conversational English, and the like. As I understand that a lot of people are equipped with similar skill sets to those of mine, I need to continue improving myself.
I like to do yoga, shopping, (可能搵下其他愛好會聽落 professional 少少). My friends and family said that I like to talk and I smile all the time. My teacher said that I am not a shy person, and I am very personable.
I like to interact with people, and I am highly interested in the cosmetics profession. I believe that I can succeed in this job. (最後一句好重要﹐記得用 I believe).
翻譯係比較個人化﹐所以可以有其他翻譯架。 Good luck ^.^.