英文可唔可以甘講?

上面的翻譯有些不對﹐ 這句正確翻譯是:

I spend my leisure/free time reading and working out in a gym.

你所打既sentence係一ｄ問題都冇

因為你問題係可唔可以咁講, speech既要求伙唔會好大. 最好就係咁簡簡單單一聽就明.

樓上戶suggest話加上去gym個d係不需要的，work out已經係做運動既意思，而且work out呢個phrase同reading本身都係noun, 文法上都冇問題. 所以你咁講係絕對冇錯. 只要係識英文既人都會明. 放心

I like excerising in gymnasium & reading during my leisure time

or

I like gymnastic excerises & reading during my leisure time

No!

I like reading books and working out in gym in my free time.

pretty good already but you can refine your sentence like this:
I like working out and reading in my leisure time.

可以這樣說
I read books and go to gym in my spare time.

My suggestion is:
I like having training in the gymnasium and reading in free time.

I like working out and reading in my free time