Check my Grammar

2007-07-13 1:09 am
During the college period , i gained a lot of specific knowledge and partical skills in the area of company secreatary that it's further equiped myself with a great attitude which is necessary for my future job.

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2007-07-13 1:16 am
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I think your sentence is too long which is difficult to be understood. Also, there are some wrong use of words and I've revised your sentence as follows:

During the college period, i have gained a lot of concrete knowledge and practical skills in the area of company secreatary. All these have further equiped myself with a good attitude which is necessary for my future job.
2007-07-13 1:51 am
I have gained a lot of useful knowledge and practical skills in the area of company secreatary during the college period. These knowledge and skills further developed myself with a good attitude for which is necessary for my future job.
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2007-07-13 1:48 am
I must be cap. letter


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