請幫忙改下D英文!Thx!

2007-07-12 1:24 am
I like playing badminton because it is so fun and I can build a good relationship with my friends or classmates~And this can train my body too~!!

回答 (6)

2007-07-12 2:08 am
✔ 最佳答案
I think it would be better:

I like playing badminton.It is because playing badminton is fun and interesting.I can build up a better relationship with my classmates and friends too.Also,playing badminton(or you may use "it") is good for my health.

2007-07-11 18:09:24 補充:
sorry,is:(or you may use 'it' )
2007-07-17 2:13 am
I like to play badminton because it is fun and I can improve my relationships with my friends and classmates. In addition, it can train up my body.

hope can help
參考: myself
2007-07-12 1:37 am
我認為改成這樣會較好:

I like playing badminton because of several reasons. First, it is funny. Besides, it gives a chance to enhance the relationship with my friends. Finally, I can be healthier.
2007-07-12 1:34 am
I like to play badminton because it is so fun and I can build a good relationship with my friends and classmates. Besides, it is a good form of body training too.
2007-07-12 1:33 am
I likes play badminton because it is very interesting and I can build the good relationship with my friends and classmates.This also make my body more healthy.
2007-07-12 1:30 am
i like playing badminton because it is enjoybale. Besides, I can build up a good relationship with my friends and classmates.Also it is a good exercise to train me too.

希望幫到你~
參考: 自己


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