請幫忙改下D英文！Thx！

I think it would be better:

I like playing badminton.It is because playing badminton is fun and interesting.I can build up a better relationship with my classmates and friends too.Also,playing badminton(or you may use "it") is good for my health.

2007-07-11 18:09:24 補充：
sorry,is:(or you may use 'it' )

I like to play badminton because it is fun and I can improve my relationships with my friends and classmates. In addition, it can train up my body.

hope can help

我認為改成這樣會較好:

I like playing badminton because of several reasons. First, it is funny. Besides, it gives a chance to enhance the relationship with my friends. Finally, I can be healthier.

I like to play badminton because it is so fun and I can build a good relationship with my friends and classmates. Besides, it is a good form of body training too.

I likes play badminton because it is very interesting and I can build the good relationship with my friends and classmates.This also make my body more healthy.

i like playing badminton because it is enjoybale. Besides, I can build up a good relationship with my friends and classmates.Also it is a good exercise to train me too.

希望幫到你~