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Do not write "TO Whom it may Concern" Check the name of the Principal of Wong Fu Nam College

14th July, 2007

Dear Mr. Chan

RE: Applying for transfer (underlined)

I am applying for transfer to Form 2f your school. I have been a student of XXXCollege for one year. My grades are above average (don't say good-many people will apply too) . Apart from serious academics studies, I took art in the school choir and XXXX. I am now Grade 8 in my piano study and Grade ? in ...

I am eager to apply as a transfer student because I need to have a more chanllenging school .I am much imprressed by your school excellent academic atmosphere and results. I also noticed that your school has won champion and prizes in the Music and Speech Festival in 2006. I also like the teaching methods ofXXXSubject name. I think I can learn more if I have the opportunity to tranfer to your school.

Please tell me what process of application I need to go through. I will be highly apprecatied if you can interview me.

Thank you for your asistance.

Yours Sincerrely,

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(Type your name and attach your infor: copies ofreports and cert.)
No need to write a lot because the most important thing is your result and prizes in school. If they are interested, they will call you. But pls. be ready for more info about the school, such as what's good about them and why you like the school
Good Luck!