轉校要寫求情信,應該點寫?

轉校信 English sample

Headmaster:

I am the parents of XXX. The little woman studies in F.3 in XXX middle school now. I find the little woman / child's teaching way in this school is not very suitable. Specially write to us now, chance is it vouchsafe to look forward to, let little woman / child can open up chief of institute to the limit under to teach beginners your school.
Also once visited the open day of your school, the guiding principle for running a school to your school was known very much, not only focus on students' study but also give consideration to students in extracurriliar development. In this year, I often inquire about the materials of your school on the net, asking about the situation of having a class to students of your school, they behave very happily, full of very happy smiles especially on one. The attitude that I teach to the environment, facility and teachers in your school conscientiously is appreciated very much. After put down with the husband, we is it is it join a class in the middle of the course the letter of application for enrollment in a school to submit to your school to determine unanimously. We are sure that there is good education, could serve society to lay a solid foundation in the future for the little woman. So specially write to the headmaster, wish to administrate the high-quality education that the little daughter had an opportunity to accept your school, become a one's share of your school, enable her to tide over a happy campus life.
The rude place, please excuse me!

Wish all teachers and students in your school good health, live a happy life



XXX parents Sincerely yours

2007-07-11 15:31:30 補充：
轉校信 Chinese sample中學校長：本人乃XXX之家長。小女現於XXX中學就讀F.2。本人發現小女/兒對於該校之教學方式不太適合。 現特來函，期盼賜予機會，讓小女/兒能在 貴校之啟蒙下盡展所長。本人亦曾經參觀 貴校的開放日，對 貴校之辦學方針十分清楚，既著重學生的學業，又兼顧學生在課餘的發展。在這年多的時間裡，本人經常在網上查詢 貴校的資料, 又向 貴校學生打聽上課的情況，他們均表現得十分開心，面上更是充滿很愉快的笑容。 XXXX年X月X日

2007-07-11 15:31:41 補充：
本人對 貴校環境、設施和老師們認真教學的態度非常欣賞。經過與丈夫相討後，我們一致決定向 貴校遞交插班入學申請信。我們確信有良好的教育，才能為小女在日後為社會服務打好基礎。故特致函校長，盼能給與小女有機會接受 貴校的優質教育，成為 貴校的一份子，讓她能渡過一個快樂的校園生活。唐突之處，敬請見諒！祝 貴校各師生身體健康、生活愉快XXX家長 謹上

不如你寫
點解你想入呢間學校(梗係話佢校風好,,你入到去一定可以令自己改過自新=口=!?)
你已下定決心反省改過...
跟住可以寫D普通轉校信要寫既野...:

１）為什麼要轉校？－－　搬屋？返學時間長？父母不大喜歡這間學校？（請不要盡數現讀學校的缺點，這是校長不喜歡的）
２）所選／申請轉讀的學校為什麼適合你？－－成績好？多課外活動？返學時間短？口碑好？環境好？師生關係好？有課餘功課輔導？
３）自己的成績及品行（學業與非學業）
４）自己的專長及興趣　(運動、音樂、美術、棋藝．．．．)
５）如蒙學校取錄，必定努力讀書，不負所託。

當然，信中也要附上個人資料（包括　照片、姓名、性別、電話、地址，現在就讀的學校、現在參加的課外活動等），並且附上原校成績表。
如有錯漏...對不起了=0=