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I am a Form 6 student. Currently, I am a monitress, the vice-chairperson/chairman of the badminton team, and the chairperson/chairman of the chess club. As the result of my active participation in extra curricular activities, I have developed good communication skills and strong organization abilities as I liaise and work with my teachers and fellow students.

Because I am the monitor, vice-chairman of the badminton team and the chairman of the chess club, I have developed excellent organisation as well as communication skills through the constant coordination between different teaching staff and students.

I am a Form 6 student who act as a monitress, the vice - chairperson of a badminton team and the chairperson of a chess club. Therefore, i have developed good communication skills and good organization skills by working with different teachers and students.

Here, i didn't changed much, i just corrected your gramma, by the way is this for a resume or something???