英文問題~~~~

Could you return the keys to us please?
" 煩請交還鎖匙比我地"

I would like to check your room.
" 我要檢查你間room "

Charges for key replacement will deduct from the deposit.
" 鎖匙既費用會係按金度扣"

2007-07-06 10:57:15 補充：
" 我要檢查你間room "I would like to inspect your room.

2007-07-06 10:58:15 補充：
Charges for key /keys replacement will deduct from the deposit." 鎖匙既費用會係按金度扣"

如果我想同個客講 " 煩請交還鎖匙比我地"
Would you mind to give me your key?

如果我想同佢講 " 我要檢查你間room "
Excuse me. I need to check your room.

如果個客小左條鎖匙, 我想同佢講 " 鎖匙既費用會係按金度扣"
I am sorry. The charge of the key will be added into your deposit.

1. May I have the key back please?
2. Please let me check your room.
3. The cost of the key will be deducted from your deposit. (remember it should be passive voice - add a "be")

1.ok
2.ok
3. money of the key the key will charge in your deposit