請問英文文法對嗎?

1. 句子漏了個article: This chair is a new arrival.
因為arrival是個名詞，所以你不可以缺少article.

2. 文法正確，不過你可以簡潔一點說成：These are our bestsellers.

3. 差不多正確。It takes four weeks if you want to order a new one.
因為新的一個不是指的的一個，所以你不可以用 definite article "the."
It takes ... 作需時解，it是個impersonal it。

4. The chair that you ordered has arrived. Please bring your order confirmation for pick-up.
由於「訂」的時態是過去，所以order要用過去式。「來到」是剛完成，所以用present perfect。這個不可以用被動式寫，因為椅子是動詞來到的主語。
Order form 可能可接受，但因為多數公司都會出其票據，所以用order confirmation或receipt會比較好。

除了#3,都冇話對與否...因為我相信聽者會明白的

如果講得好聽d,有禮貌d,會話:

1.
this chair is new in the stock.
or
this chair is the latest version.
or
it is a brand new product.
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咁我唔知係新d乜啦,咁可以簡介下新d乜啦,比如,
it is released a new colour,.
or
it is added a feature of ...(blah blah blah)



2.Good!

不過如果間店舖唔只賣chair,而你只想表達個張是最多人買呢

Everyone bought "this" / "it" / "this chair" when they come to the store.
or
It is very popular, everyone asked for "this".
or
I have sold a lot of "this".

咁講會比客人既感覺好d,唔係讚緊自己既店ma



3.**
It WILL take (around, about) 4 weeks if ordering a new one.
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加around或about,好似d時間短d,客人會聽到都唔係咁耐ma
如果佢個眼神表示時間係一個問題
咁你咪講, I will try to ask for a shorter time if you are in hurry.



4.再禮貌dd
The chair that you ordered is ready.
or
The chiar that you ordered is in the store now.
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"is ready" 同 "is in the store" 都係present tense, 咁即係已經到左啦
個tense有加強意思,而用present perfect 既話,好似轉折左d
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Please (kindly) come to the store and pick it up with the ordering form/ reciept.
or
Please bring the reciept next time visiting our store/ our shop.



老實說,只要你每字發音標準,令他人明白,講得慢,講錯左,都唔係一個問題
如果某字發音困難,咁你大可以用回自己比較容易掌握既字,咁自信心都大d啦.

hope can help u la
good luck la.

2007-07-04 03:30:19 補充：
係唔係我諗多左?你只想知grammer既問題...定係你係做緊既呢? heehee

1. this chair is our new item
2. these are the best items of our company
3. it's taking 4 weeks if you want to order the new one
4. the chair that you ordered was arrived, please come to collect it with the original order form.

1, The Chair is brand new.
2, These products are the bestsellers of our company.
3, It takes 4 weeks to proceed/arrive if you want to order a new one.
4, The chair that you ordered has been arrived, please bring the order form with you when you come.