想向老細請假

想寫個e-mail俾老細話想用我餘下十天的有請五天假, 由7月16日至7月20日,應該點寫?
I hereby asking your permission to take 5 days off as annual leave from 16-20, July 2007. Thank you.
Remarks: The balance of my annualy leave of 2007 is five (5) days.
注: 你不需提及有薪年假, 因這十天或十二天年假是你應有的. You don't have to mention pay-leave as you are entitled to enjoy your annual leave.

Please allow me to apply five days annual leave from 16 July to 20 July.

Dear (Mr or Miss or Mrs),

As my annual pay leave still has ten days remain, I would like to request to take five days from 16/7/2007 to 20/7/2007 from my annual pay leave, I will help to arrange other colleagues to fill in my place during this period.

Yours sincerely,

your name

Is that ok?

2007-07-03 18:10:12 補充：
should be Paid annual leave