幫手改下英文文法, please (+10分)

2007-07-03 4:18 am
In my first image, there is force on each part of fine point. On matter notice interview procedure and interview process which is same step in the full time interview. On the side, each employee glad they are loved to share. They cater for everyone regardless of rank. Join to invite HK and 蛇口 trips and we have course to study together. All manner of trips and course not only let you know whole company flow path, it is to pay much attention to development owner thinking.
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我對公司的第一印象, 感到公司對每一細節也很著重. 不論在通知面試, 或是在面試的過程當中. 每一個步驟都和全職面試的方式相同. 另外每一位職員也很樂意分享. 這裏不存在階級的限制. 公司會提供香港和蛇口參觀的行程和課程給每一個員工, 這不但令人了解公司的流程, 而且也著重個人的思維發展. 公司栽植了很多的植物, 令人加添舒服的感覺. 在這個輕鬆的環境下能放鬆心情去工作. 除此公司舉辨了不少的活動, 好似生日派對和網球活動等等. 這些也是吸引著我的地方.

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2007-07-03 6:05 am
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in my first image, there was a force on each part of fine point. no matter notice interview procedure and interview process which are same step in the full time interview. on the other hand, each employee is very gald to share to other. they cater for everyone regardless of rank. joining the trip of HK and 蛇口, we have courses and explore together. all manner of trips and course not only give you a chance to know the whole flow path of the company, it also give ys to have a chance to develop owner's thinking.

我諗係甘
2007-07-03 5:26 am
is=was
are=were
+ed or .........
use 'pasts ten'


.........each employee glad they are loved to share=each employee glad they were loved to share.
Join to invite HK and 蛇口 trips ???

That OK!
I don't know aother , because I am only J.4!
2007-07-03 4:26 am
對不起,可不可以用中文大約說出內容大意?再替你改


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