找錯處...(英文) thz

it change, u see where is the wrong word yourshelves.


My pet is a hamster. He is two year old. I like him a lot
because he is soft and warm. He like sit in my pocket.
Coco can do lots of things. He can escape firm his cage
and he can find much places to hide in our flat. He can
also run inside its hamster wheel for ten minutes without
stopping. Coco can do one little trick. He can rolls around
the flat in his special ball made in plastic. We put him in
the ball and he rolls from room to room. He very clever at
it. Coco can’t see very well. We watch him carefully when
he is walking the table because he can easily fall off.

2007-06-28 19:47:26 補充：
is made BY plastic, not made IN plastic

2007-06-28 19:48:42 補充：
i like him a lot can change it to i like it VERY MUCH.

2007-06-28 19:50:18 補充：
2行he LIKES TO sit in my pocket.

2007-06-28 19:51:35 補充：
is not use HE,is use IT ,hamster is a animal

2007-06-28 19:52:26 補充：
wrong: frimis FIRM

2007-06-28 19:54:01 補充：
4行:much places change to many places

2007-06-28 19:55:58 補充：
6行:coco can do A little trick

2007-06-28 19:57:38 補充：
6行:can ROLL, not rolls

2007-06-28 19:58:31 補充：
the flat WITH his special ball

2007-06-28 19:59:16 補充：
He IS very clever at it.

2007-06-28 20:00:01 補充：
see very goodGOOD change to WELL

2007-06-28 20:00:46 補充：
he is walking ON the table

2007-06-28 20:02:36 補充：
HE CAN EASILY FALL OFF change tohe WILL FALL DOWN EASILY.

2007-06-28 20:05:35 補充：
year oldchange toyearS old

2007-06-28 20:06:55 補充：
*BIG WORD is the answer(change already), i want to be the best answer.

2007-07-01 14:59:28 補充：
sorry! made in: a places ( china.....)made by: a companymade of: something

He is two year old. He like sit in my pocket. Coco can do a lots of things. He can rolls around.

I CANT BE STUFFED WRITING THE REST!!! NO OFFENCE BUT UR ENGLISH IS SO BAD!!!

it"s My pet is a hamster.He is two years old.I like him a lot
because he is soft and warm.He like sit on my pocket.
Coco can do a lots of things.He can escape from his cage
and he can find much places to hide in our flat.He can
also run inside its hamster wheel for ten minutes without
stopping.Coco can do one little trick.He can rolls around the flat in his special ball made in plastic.We put him in
the ball and he rolls from room to room.He very clevers at
it.Coco can't see very good.We watch him carefully when
he is walking the table because he ca



n easily fall off.

My pet is a hamster .He is two year old. I like him a lot
because he is soft and warm. He like sit in my pocket.
Coco can do a lots of things. He can escape frim his cage
and he can find much places to hide in our flat. He can
also run inside its hamster wheel for ten minutes without
stopping. Coco can do one little trick. He can rolls around
the flat in his special ball made in plastic. We put him in
the ball and he rolls from room to room. He very clever at
it. Coco can’t see very good. We watch him carefully when
he is walking the table because he can easily fall off.

第1行既tw0 year 0ld應該係 Tw0 years old`
第2行既like 要加{s} 變成likes`
第3行既a lots of應該系lots of /a lot of ` 重有我想問下發表者個from系米打錯變左frim`
第4行既much應該系many` 因為places系countable `
第5行就既its應該系his`
第6行既r0lls應該冇{s} ` 姐系r0ll` 因為can字後面吾會加任何野`
第7行既made in應該系made by`
第8行he very clever 系he同very之間加個is` 因為一個句子吾可以冇verb`
第9行既g00d 應該要變成well`
第10行walking the table系要加個0n系walking 同 the 之間`

My pet is a hamster.He is two year old(years/year-old).I like him a lot
because he is soft and warm.He like sit(likes sitting/likes to sit) in my pocket.
Coco can do a lots(lot) of things.He can escape frim(from) his cage
and he can find much(many) places to hide in our flat.He can
also run inside its(his) hamster wheel for ten minutes without
stopping.Coco can do one little trick.He can rolls(roll) around

the flat in his special ball made in(by) plastic.We put him in
the ball and he rolls from room to room.He (is)very clever at
it(that).Coco can't see very good.We watch him carefully when
he is walking(on) the table because he can easily fall off.

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My pet is a hamster.He is two year(plural form, add "s" for two years) old.I like him a lot
because he is soft and warm.He like(add 's' as he is third person) sit in my pocket.
Coco can do a lot(無s) of things.He can escape frim(from) his cage
and he can find much(much is wrong, should be many) places to hide in our flat.He can
also run inside its(before is "HE", so should be 'his') hamster wheel for ten minutes without
stopping.Coco can do one little trick.He can rolls (無s after can) around
the flat in his special ball made in plastic.We put him in
the ball and he rolls from room to room.He (miss the verb, add "IS") very clever at
it.Coco can't see very good.We watch him carefully when
he is walking (miss the preposition, add "ON") the table because he can easily fall off.

2007-06-28 19:49:12 補充：
Should be made by plastic, not made in