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Good morning. Today I am going to present a story book to you. This book is titled ‘Mummies in the morning’. The writer of this book is Mary Pope Osborne. This story talks about two children called Jack and Annie. One day, they went to a magic tree house. The house whisks them back to ancient Egypt. In Egypt, they saw pyramids. They meet a long-dead-Queen called the Queen of Nile there. The Queen requested Jack and Annie to solve the puzzle and helped her to pass through the Underworld. At last, Jack and Annie satisfied the need of the Queen.
In this story, the character I like most is Jack. Because he is brave to explore to the pyramids and he is very energetic. This book teaches us about the hieroglyph and the story is very creative.

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Good morning. Today I am going to present a story book called ‘Mummies in the morning’. It is written by Mary Pope Osborne. This story talks about two children, Jack and Annie. One day, Annie and Jack went into a magic tree house, which whisks them back to ancient Egypt. They saw that there were pyramids.

There they meet a long-dead-Queen called the Queen of Nile. The Queen needs Jack and Annie to solve the puzzle puzzle for her so that she can pass through the Underworld. At last, Jack and Annie are able to solve the puzzle

In this story, the character I like most is Jack because he is brave to explore the pyramids and he is very energetic throughout the journey. It is a very creative story and it teaches us a lot about the hieroglyph.

Good morning. Today I am going to present a story book to you. The book is 'Mummies in the morning' by Mary Pope Osborne. It is about two children Jack and Annie. One day, they went to a magic tree house and were whisked back to ancient Egypt. They saw pyramids there and met a long-dead-Queen called the Queen of Nile. The Queen needed the help of Jack and Annie to solve a puzzle and helped her to pass through the Underworld. At last, they were able to help the Queen. In this story, the character that I like most is Jack. He is brave to explore the pyramids and he is very energetic. One thing very special about the book is that it teaches us about the hieroglyph of ancient Egypt. The story is also very creative and entertaining! Thank you.