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Here is my suggestion:
Good morning! My name is Mandy. I am twenty two years old and live in Tuen Wan with my family.
I like drawing. Besides, I love playing sports like playing volleyball and basketball.
I would describe myself as outgoing, talkative and having strong sense of resposiblity.
I completed my Form five studies at xx secondary school. My previous job was being a reception clerk at xyz company. In the job, my main duties include filing, data entry and general clerical work. Apart from that job, I also worked as a clerk and salesperson before. Therefore, my previous jobs have made me more familiar with the nature of clerical work and team spirit.
I saw this job advertisement online and made up mind to apply for it. I think my previous work experience has made me competent for this position.
I am glad to here today. I am also grateful to you for inviting me to this inteview.
Thank You!
2007-06-21 18:11:43 補充:
In the 2nd paragraph, it should be "responsiblity" at the end.In the 4th paragraph, it should be ".........made up my mind......."In the last paragraph, it should be" I am glad to be here today".