我想問以下一般商業英文e-mail的文法問題 2

As the instruction in our phone conversation on 4 July,
and what i mentioned and explained.
I will keep inform you about the order status
(if you say i will keep you inform....that it would be the oppsite meaning...it would became the customer has to tell you the information...)
I had confirmed the time of our meeting. It would be on Friday 24, June. At 10:00a.m.
(you have to use past tense...because you already sure about the time of the meeting.)

I confirem to have a meeting with you. ( i suggest you don;t have to type this again...becuase it would be pretty annoying....)

I will give you comments when you/ I receive the samples
(i don;t know who will receive the samples...so i just put you/ I...you can decide it yourself....and when you use "will" it means he future....so don't use "received" becasue it is a past tense.)

We will have a lunch with my boss at next Monday's afternoon.
(in this sentense...you had specfic "afternoon"...so you have to say "at" instead of "on")

Noted on L/C amendment, thank you!
Received/ Will receive your samples with sinceres.

(so...um....don't use thank you over again...i want to change it to sinceres...and i am not sure did you receive the samples yet....so if you did...then use pastense...but if you didn't then use future tense........in addition...i thought that you say the customer will receive the samples, not you........so how come you wrote " received your samples with many thanks" ....if you write it like this....it's going to be other send you samples...and you are the one who is going to receive.....anyways...you may just explain it to me in chinese...and i can help you more.)


i hope this can help you^^ GOOD LUCK!!!

As instructed in our phone conversation on 4 July <- who's instruction?
As per our/your instruction on the phone which we had on 4 July

As mentioned/ As explained on phone <- this one is ok

I will keep you informed on the order status <- this one is also ok

I confirm meeting with you on Friday 24 June at 10;00 a.m.
I now confirm with you of the meeting on Friday, 24 June, at 10:00 a.m.

I willl provide you the comments once the sample is received.

We will have lunch with the boos on next Monday afternoon.

The L/C amendment was noted. Thank you.

Your samples were well received. Thank you.