應徵信application letter(英文) 字眼gramma問題..

Dear Sir/Madam,

Application for the post of clerk
I am writing responses to your advertisement in Interactive Employment Service Of The Labour Department on 13.6. 20007 inviting applications for the post of clerk in your department.

I have completed my secondary school education atxxxxxxxxx你可以講ive果個喇,,,in May of 2008 with 6 passes in the HKCEE呢到你講你的學歷.I am skilled in Microsoft Word, Excel, Power point. I speak fluent Cantonese, English and Potonghua .

I would like to apply this for the position of the clerk because I am very interested in this kind of job. I was the Monitress in the school呢到講你果d活動. I also worked as a clerk at xxxxx for and gained some experience including data entry . 睇下你有冇咩經驗喇...如果有係呢到打

I have enclosed with this letter my resume. I would be grateful if I could be granted an interview.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your kind attention.

Yours faithfully,
xxxxx
xxxxx



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1 Resume

我希望我以下的資料可以幫助到你.

在application letter, 係一個最重要的機會去用簡而精的句子去令將來的僱主知道你的長處, 在學校裏的academic & activities 得到了什麼知識或者skills. 你可以用以下的一段句子作為你參考之用. [XXXX or ( ) 係因應你的case 去改的]

"I am writing in response to the job opportunity as a XXXX in XXXX Limited. I am strongly interested in the opportunities to develop my career in (sales and marketing) industry.

Having graduated from the XXXXX in Sales & Marketing (or business) discipline, I have developed not only the analytical skills thinking, but also the presentation skills. During my leisure time in College, I assisted on the school events as a marketing coordinator (your post). Inside the team, I earned the valuable experience while assisted to organize the school events and activities, such as Open days, xxxx, and xxxx. "

記著, 封application letter 唔可以多過一張紙, 以及要有你objectives.

祝你成功.