我想寫信通知更改地址, 咁寫岩吾岩?
Please be informed that our shop address has been changed to xxxxxxxxxx.
Please update your record accordingly. Should you have any enquires, please feel free to contact xxxxxxxxx at (Tel no).
Yours faithfully,
但我吾用 Please be informed that 開頭可以用咩, 因第二段用左Please update開頭, 好似好煩咁.
另外 用 has been changed 文法有無錯?
tks
更改地址.
2007-06-13 9:54 pm
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2007-06-13 10:21 pm
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Please be informed that ourshop address is changed to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.Kindly update your record accordingly. Should you have any enquiries, please feel free to contact xxxxxxxxxxx at (Tel No).
Yours faithfully,
[is this one ok? then won't be too many 'please' there and that is close to your original]
參考: me
2007-06-13 10:28 pm
Change-of-Address Notice
for
XXXX XXXX Company
We have pleasure in announcing that we are moving into X floor of the XXXX Building, on 13 June, 2007.
The new address is as follows:
XXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXX
Please change our address on your records.
However, phone and fax numbers remain the same:
Phone number : XXXXXXXX
Fax number : XXXXXXXX
We are looking forward to your coming to see us at our new office.
for
XXXX XXXX Company
We have pleasure in announcing that we are moving into X floor of the XXXX Building, on 13 June, 2007.
The new address is as follows:
XXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXX
Please change our address on your records.
However, phone and fax numbers remain the same:
Phone number : XXXXXXXX
Fax number : XXXXXXXX
We are looking forward to your coming to see us at our new office.
參考: me
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