修改英文(短)

I thought how I do have grasp to form a mutual financing association quite well. But really needs the long time the practice.

I guessed I was going to take the game under control, but I really need somemore time for pracitce.

順帶一提，第一句的went如果是指上星期，那麼應該用last friday(不要在前面加on喔)
如果整篇都是past tense記得轉回past tense
另外，try to use diiferent club有點詞不達意，club一般都不是use，中文也不會說"我嘗試去用幾個會"，join, attend都會比較恰當

沒有recentaly只有recently喔
i am doing my project recentaly, well i have had never write the ApA style before and teaching guilde, but i still try to do my best on it.
這一句有三個主動詞但只有一個連接詞，在well那句最好加一個回去

先幫你中文嗰 part:

我覺得我有掌握到如何打會比較好.但是真的還是需要長時間的練習:
I think it would be better if I could handle the way to play, but still need more time to practice.

(小心其他人唔知喺咩翻譯網站幫你譯啲所謂英文)


其他的就是你英文部份有啲Grammar and Spelling mistakes:

1. went to driving range on Friday with my friends, and I try to use different clubs.

你用了 “went”, 咁即係過去式, “try” 要用 “tried”

2. i am doing my project recentaly,

“recentaly” 多了個 “a”, should be “recently”

3. well i have had never write the ApA style before and teaching guilde, but i still try to do my best on it.

“have never write”, 過去分詞, 要用 “have never written”
“guilde”, 多了個 “l”, should be “guide”


其實成段都有少少問題, ,不過唔太知你背後故事, 所以唔再改

2007-06-22 14:14:46 補充：
Totally wrong

我覺得我有掌握到如何打會比較好.但是真的還是需要長時間的練習.

I think I handled it quite well. However, it really needs longer time to practise more.

i went to driving range on friday with my friends, and i tried to use different clubs during the range. I think I had acquired mastery of controlling the clubs, but i really need more time to practice. Hopefully i can play well in th game for the next class. I am recently doing a project but I never write the ApA style before and teaching guild. Anyways, i would still try my best on it.

我覺得我有掌握到如何打會比較好.但是真的還是需要長時間的練習
I thought how I do have grasp to form a mutual financing association quite good. However, it really requires the long time the practise.

我覺得我有掌握到如何打會比較好.但是真的還是需要長時間的練習.
I think I can handling it well, but actually, it needs time for practice.

I went to driving range last Friday with my firends and I tried different clubs. I think I can get over it to play better with keeping practises. Hopefully I can play well (in the game,你指係driving range定係落green打, 好似都無必要加呢句, 你一係改做 **I can play the game well for the next class**) for the next class. I am doing my project recently, well I have never wrote the APA style before and the teaching gudie, but I still try to do my best on it.

我覺得我有掌握到如何打會比較好.但是真的還是需要長時間的練習
I think I have handled the skill but it really needs a long time to pratice