修改英文文法(很短)

I didn't show up in the class today, because I catched cold. I went to see doctor on Saturday, the doctor said I may have allergy. I don't think I won't get well on Monday, so I didn't ask for the doctor note. But I still want to write a journal of what I feel fo the golf course.

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I didn't go(1) to class today. It's because I got a cold. I went to see a doctor on Saturday, and(2) they said I might have allergy. (3)But I didn't ask them to give me a (4)sick note(5). It's because I don't know that I'll feel uncomfortable on Monday morning. Well, I didn't show up on Monday. But I still want to write the journal about(6) what I feel for the golf course so far.

1.去上堂，不是來(come)上堂
2.連接詞漏了
3.意思上並沒有太直接的關連，斷新句比較好
4.未出現過的名詞，用a不是用the
5.是sick note
6.journal是名詞，what I feel for the golf course也是名詞，中間應該適當的preposition，可以不用about，不過要用個意思對的

I rewrite your paragraph as follows (I hope I understand your para correctly):

I am sorry that I didnt come to the class today because I caught a cold on Saturday. I thought I would have recovered over the weekend so I had not asked for a sick leave certificate from the doctor. Although I couldnt show up today, I would still like to write the journal about my views towards the golf course.

請問作者，today 係咪 Monday？以下當係：
I didn't come to class today. It's because I got a cold, so I went to see a doctor on Saturday. He/She （唔係重症，唔會有多位醫生會診）I might have allergy, but I didn't ask him/her to give me a doctor's note because I didn't （你當時係咁做） know that I would still feel unwell this morning. Well, I didn't show up today. But I still want to write the journal about what I feel for the golf course so far.

2007-06-22 09:10:16 補充：
catchED?

I didn't come to class today because I got a cold. I went to see the doctor on last Saturday, and the doctor said I might have allergiy but I haven't asked for a doctor certification since I think I'll get well on Monday. However, I'm still sick on Monday monring. That's why I was absent today. But I still want to write the journal about what I feel for the golf course.

do you mean only correct your grammer? then i won't help you make a big change~

I didn't come to class today because I got a cold. I went to see doctor on Saturday and they said I might have allergy. I didn't know that I'll feel unomfortable on Monay so I didn't ask them to give me a doctor note. Well, I was absent on Monday; but i still want to write a journal about how I feel for the golf course so far.


^^.....hope this can help you~

2007-06-13 08:50:57 補充：
o..if your doctor is a man...or woman ...please don't use the word "they"~ use she or he would be much make sense...^^

i was absent today because i got a cold. When i went to see the doctor on Saturday, he said I might have allergy. Howerver, I didn't requir the doctor to give me the doctor sheet. It's because i don't know that i will feel comfortable on Monday. Althought i don't show up on Monday, i still want to write the journal waht i feel for the golf so far.