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The elder has lived period of very much time in this world, moreover very many matters their experience are more than the later generation.
Every so often because young people young ignorant, moreover makes very many matter's time also to impulse compared to the senior citizen.
The young people could not control own mood frequently, moreover, because some matters we did not have the experience, often attempted time could make a mistake, although some matter senior citizen not necessarily had the experience, but always knew nothing about us the young people were better.
We thought possibly the senior citizen is very bothersome, but they are also hope us to be good, only then like this.
Therefore I thought that the young people should accept senior citizen's advice.

topic: young people should respect old people and follow their advice.
長輩在這個世界生活了一段很多的時間,
而且很多事情他們的經驗比後輩多.
很多時候年青人因為年少無知,
而且做很多事情的時間也比老年人衝動.
年青人經常控制不了自己的情緒,
另外,因為有些事情我們沒有經驗,
往往自己嘗試的時候都會出錯,
雖然有些事情老年人也不一定有經驗,
但是總比我們一無所知的年青人好.
可能我們覺得老年人很煩,
可是他們也是希望我們好,才這樣.
所以我認為年青人應該接受老年人的忠告


Topic: Young people should respect old people and follow theiradvice. The elder has lived period of very much time in this world, Moreover very many matters their experience the latergeneration. are more than Very many times kids because young is ignorant, Moreover handles very many matters the time also impulsecompared to the senior citizen kids frequently could not control own mood, Moreover, because some matters we do not have the experience, Often own attempt time can make a mistake, Although some matters senior citizen not necessarily has theexperience, But always kids which knows nothing about us is betterthan Possible we to think the senior citizen is very bothersome, But they also are hoped we are good, only then like this Therefore I thought kids should accept senior citizen's advice

長輩在這個世界生活了一段很多的時間, 而且很多事情他們的經驗比後輩多.
（其實第一句好怪：唔係呢個世界係邊度？而且「在這個世界生活了一段很多的時間」好似講緊一ｄ活化石（如鸚鵡螺）咁
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，建議改為下句）
Our seniors have lived through all kinds of difficult situations, and are immensely more experienced than young people.

很多時候年青人因為年少無知, 而且做很多事情的時間也比老年人衝動.
A lot of times young people act out of impromptus because of callowness.
年青人經常控制不了自己的情緒,
They often have trouble regulating their emotions.
另外,因為有些事情我們沒有經驗, 往往自己嘗試的時候都會出錯,
Also, young people are prone to making mistakes trying out things that they have no experience in.
雖然有些事情老年人也不一定有經驗, 但是總比我們一無所知的年青人好.
（呢個論點似欠說服力，故改為：）
It is true that our seniors may not have the relevant experience either, but they have their world knowledge which young people lack.
可能我們覺得老年人很煩, 可是他們也是希望我們好,才這樣.
所以我認為年青人應該接受老年人的忠告.
A lot of us may feel tired of our seniors' endless lectures. However, they only do it to help and share the lessons they have learned. Therefore, I think young people should gratefully accept their advice.

topic: young people should respect old people and follow their advice.
長輩在這個世界生活了一段很多的時間,
而且很多事情他們的經驗比後輩多.
很多時候年青人因為年少無知,
而且做很多事情的時間也比老年人衝動.
年青人經常控制不了自己的情緒,
另外,因為有些事情我們沒有經驗,
往往自己嘗試的時候都會出錯,
雖然有些事情老年人也不一定有經驗,
但是總比我們一無所知的年青人好.
可能我們覺得老年人很煩,
可是他們也是希望我們好,才這樣.
所以我認為年青人應該接受老年人的忠告.

The senior citizens have been living in this world for over a long period of time.
Futhermore, they have more experience in a lot of social matters than the junior citizens.
There are a lot of youngsters who are unable to control their personal emotions effectively due to tha fact that they are lacking of experience and they are more aggressive than the senior citizens in terms of dealing with social matters.
Apart from that, we always experience failure when we are trying to deal with some sort of matters because of the lacking of some sort of experiences.
Although the senior citizens are not necessarily having the experiences on some sort of matters, they are at least better than the junior citizens in terms of the basic knowledge.
We sometime possibly think of the senior citizens quite annoying, but they just want us well to be such an annoying person.
Therefore, I think the juniors should accept the advices made by the senior citizens.