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When winter comes, Gary has nothing to eat because he has not collected enough food in summer , he just played with his friends happily. He asked Andy the ant for giving some food to him to eat. ''Now, you know why I work hard in summer, and you just liked to play and did not collected any food, how do you feel now ? Andy asked.

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說話內容不應用past tense
第4行應該 you just like to play and do not collect any food .
did not collected 是很錯的 did 之後又怎可用collected
最後漏了「"」 在 Andy asked 之前。
交功課或交卷前必須 小心 check 清楚。

When winter came,Gary has nothing to eat because he has not collected food in summer , he just play with his friends . He asked Andy the ant to give some food to eat .'Now , you know why I am work hard in Summer , you just like to play,don't collect any food, and then how do you feel now ?' asked the ant.

2007-06-05 17:59:47 補充：
if this is a story, please use the PAST TENSE!!!