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It is because teenagers are now becoming more rebellious, they always neglect their parents feelings all the time, so I think they will learned kinship is so crucial to them, and they will treasure their kinship. The second things is, as say going, the failure is the mother of success, Amy and her father were trying many times and method to help the goose flies, although they are always unsuccessful, they never feel so frustraded and give up. So you will learn to be stronger when you have difficulty.

It is because teenagers are more rebellious nowadays, they neglect their parents' feelings all the time. In my opinion, kinship learning is so crucial to them. As long as with a strong kinship, both the parents and their children will more treasure each other. The other point is, as the saying goes, "failure is the mother of success". Amy and her father tried many times to help the goose flies in different methods. Although they were unsuccessful, they never feel frustraded and given up. One will learn to be stronger when facing and overcoming the difficulties.

Because teenagers are now becoming more rebellious and they always neglect their parents' feelings all the time so that I think lerned kinship is so crucial to them and hope they will treasure their kinship. The second things is that as the saying of gooes, failure is the mother of success, Amy and her father were trying many times and though some method to help the goose flys, although they always unsuccessful, they have never felt frustraded and give up. So you learn to be stronger when you have difficulty.



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Owing to the fact that teenagers are now becoming more rebellious and that they always neglect their parents' feelings all the time, I think it is important for them to learn kinship and thus to treasure it. The second thing is,as the saying goes 'Failure is the mother of success', Amy and her father have been repeatedly using different kinds of methods to try to help the goose flys. Although they are always unsuccessful, they never feel frustrated and never give up. So you will learn to be stronger when you have difficulty.