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In this such a difficult process, Thomas and Amy finally can break the ice. Their relationship are being better.The goose thoughts that Amy is its mother really. Another heart-stirring part is that the geese fly away home successfully at the end.So it demonstrates Amy and her fathers effort doesn’t waste. Of course, this book is very educational and meaningful story and it is suitable for children and teenagers to read.

In such difficult process, Thomas and Amy can finally break the ice. Their relationship is becoming better.The geese really thinks that Amy is its mother. Another heart-stirring part is that the geese flies back to its home successfully at the end.So, it demonstrates that Amy and her father’s effort is not wasted. Of course, this book is very educational and meaningful and it is suitable for children and teenagers to read.

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In this difficult process, thomas and Amy finally can break the ice. Their relationship are being more well.The goose thoughts that Amy is its mother. Another heart-stirring part is the geese fly away from home successfully at the end.So it demonstrates Amy and her fathers effort doesn’t wasted. Of course, this book is very educational and it is a meaningful story .Suitable for children and teenagers to read.