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2007-06-03 3:11 am
You shouldn't also try to develop some common interests with your girlfriend. Have
you ever try asking her to go hiking with you? I think it's a healthier way to spend yourweekend than to (reading)(唔要ing )in McDonald's. You could also join some interest groups together.
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2007-06-03 3:41 am
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You shouldn't also try to develop some common interests with your girlfriend. Have
you ever tried to ask her to go hiking with you? I think it's a suitable way to spend yourweekend. It is better than reading in McDonald's. You could also join some interesting groups together.
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2007-06-03 3:53 am
You shouldn't also (咁奇怪既?你係想話should also呀嘛?) try to develop some common interests with your girlfriend.

Have you ever ASKED (ever已經嘗試去做既意思, 所以唔使try, 同埋have之后要用pp..) her to go hiking with you?

I think it's a healthier way to spend your weekend than to (reading)(唔要ing )in McDonald's.

You could also join some interest groups together.
2007-06-03 3:44 am
You should try to develop some common interests with your girl friend. Have you ever ask her to go to hiking with you? I think it is a health way to spend your weekend compared with read magazine in McDonald's. Both of you can also join some interest course in spare time together.


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