(急改 , 比20 分)可唔可以幫我改文呀? (2)

In the afternoon, 『we went』 to 『the』 Hong Kong Science Museum to 『see』『the』 dinosaur fossil exhibition. 『The dinosaur fossils』 were 『larger than』 me. I chose a cute dinosaur fossil 『to take photos together.』

1. 兩個字呢, we went
2. 香港得一個科學館, 所以前面要加 the
3. to see: 雖然呢篇文講既嘢係過去咗, 但係 to 後面既動詞要係現在式
4. 用 the 指明嗰一個恐龍化石展
5. 你就咁話 "They were..." 唔係咁啱, 因為你前面只係講緊恐龍化石展, 並唔係講緊嗰d化石, 所以呢度一定要講 "The dinosaur fossils". 除非你之前已經講緊嗰d化石, 咁就可以用 they 啦.
6. large 只係話佢哋好大, 而家係比較緊, 所以要改為 larger than , 係 than , 唔係 then
7. to take photos together 一齊影相

In the afternoon,we went to*「the」* Hong Kong Science Museum to *「see」* dinosaur fossil exhibition,they were *「larger」* 「than」* me.I chose a cute dinosaur fossil took photos with me.


記住呀......to後面係唔洗轉過去式架。下次小心D喇^^

In the afternoon,we went to [the] Hong Kong Science Museum to [see] dinosaur fossil exhibition,they were [larger] then me.I chose a cute dinosaur fossil [to take photo with.]

In the afternoon, we went to Hong Kong Science Museum to see dinosaur fossils exhibition, they were larger than me. I choose a cute dinosaur fossil and took photos with me.