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Tuesday evening, I come to Hong Kong, after having rested good sleep, is travel of my Hong Kong start.
Wednesday early morning, I hoped that may go to the star light main road tour first, I want to go to look at star's elegant demeanor.
In the afternoon, I go to Hong Kong Art center to look at the cultural relic, evening, goes to the harbor city to have the supper first, then goes to Lan Kwai Fong to play, there is very lively one to the evening.
Saturday, I hoped that may go to Victoria Peak to go against, there may see the entire Victoria port.
, I will go in the afternoon to Hong Kong Madame Du Sha the wax figure hall, there may see very many celebrity's wax figures.
Evening, I go to Nanya Island to eat the seafood, listens to 説 there seafood to be very fresh sweetly.
On Sunday, is also I keeps Hong Kong last day.
Early morning, I hoped that may go to the Mipu nature protection area, there has many migratory birds, I want to experience.
Then, I will go to the woman street and the garden street, I will go to there to buy the gift for me in Australia's friends.
Evening, I will leave Hong Kong, will return to Australia

2007-06-01 22:38:12 補充：
希望可以幫到你啦~~

Tuesday night, I went to Hong Kong, a good sleep McGREGOR, my trip to Hong Kong start. Wednesday morning, I hope I can first go to the Avenue of Stars Tour, I would like to look at the star presence. Afternoon, I went to see the Hong Kong Heritage Museum, and at night went to eat dinner in Harbor City, Lan Kwai Fong to play again, there a very exciting evening. Saturday, I hope to the Peak, where we can see the whole of Victoria Harbor. Afternoon, I will go to Hong Kong Tussauds Tussaud's, where you can see lots of wax celebrities. Night, I went to eat seafood Lamma Island, I learned where the seafood is sweet. Sunday, but also my stay in Hong Kong on the last day. Morning, I hope to the Mai Po Nature Reserve, where many migratory birds, I would like to see this. Then, I will go Nu:renjie and Garden Street, I would go there for my friends in Australia to buy gifts. Evening, I will leave Hong Kong and return to Australia.

Chinese:
星期二的晚上，我來到香港，睡了一個好覺後，就是我香港之旅的開始。
星期三的早上，我希望可以先去星光大道遊覽，我想去看明星的風采。
下午，我就去香港藝術館看文物，晚上，先去海港城吃晚餐，再去蘭桂坊玩，那裏一到晚上就很熱鬧。
星期六，我希望可以去太平山頂，那裏可以看到整個維多利亞港。
下午，我就會去香港杜莎夫人蠟像館，那裏可以看到很多名人的蠟像。
晚上，我就去南丫島吃海鮮，聽説那裏的海鮮很鮮甜。
星期天，也是我留在香港的最後一天。
早上，我希望可以去米埔自然保護區，那裏有很多候鳥，我想見識一下。
然後，我就會去女人街和花園街，我會去那裏為我在澳洲的朋友買禮物。
晚上，我就會離開香港，回到澳洲。

English:
Tuesday night, I went to Hong Kong, a good sleep McGREGOR, my trip to Hong Kong start. Wednesday morning, I hope I can first go to the Avenue of Stars Tour, I would like to look at the star presence. Afternoon, I went to see the Hong Kong Heritage Museum, and at night went to eat dinner in Harbor City, Lan Kwai Fong to play again, there a very exciting evening. Saturday, I hope to the Peak, where we can see the whole of Victoria Harbor. Afternoon, I will go to Hong Kong Tussauds Tussaud's, where you can see lots of wax celebrities. Night, I went to eat seafood Lamma Island, I learned where the seafood is sweet. Sunday, but also my stay in Hong Kong on the last day. Morning, I hope to the Mai Po Nature Reserve, where many migratory birds, I would like to see this. Then, I will go Nu:renjie and Garden Street, I would go there for my friends in Australia to buy gifts. Evening, I will leave Hong Kong and return to Australia.

2007-06-02 10:28:40 補充：
Hope this could help you...... I don't know if it is all fine....

星期二的晚上，我來到香港，睡了一個好覺後，就是我香港之旅的開始。
星期三的早上，我希望可以先去星光大道遊覽，我想去看明星的風采。
下午，我就去香港藝術館看文物，晚上，先去海港城吃晚餐，再去蘭桂坊玩，那裏一到晚上就很熱鬧。
星期六，我希望可以去太平山頂，那裏可以看到整個維多利亞港。
下午，我就會去香港杜莎夫人蠟像館，那裏可以看到很多名人的蠟像。
晚上，我就去南丫島吃海鮮，聽説那裏的海鮮很鮮甜。
星期天，也是我留在香港的最後一天。
早上，我希望可以去米埔自然保護區，那裏有很多候鳥，我想見識一下。
然後，我就會去女人街和花園街，我會去那裏為我在澳洲的朋友買禮物。
晚上，我就會離開香港，回到澳洲。

Tuesday evening, I come to Hong Kong, after has rested well sense, istravel of my Hong Kong start.
Wednesday early morning, I hoped may first go to the star light mainroad tour, I want to go look at star's elegant demeanour.
Afternoon, I go to the Hong Kong art center to look at the culturalrelic, evening, first goes to the harbor city to eat the supper, thengoes to blue Gui Fangwan, that very is lively one to the evening.
Saturday, I hoped may go to the peaceful summit, that may see theentire Victoria port.
Afternoon, I can go to Hong Kong Madame Du Sha the wax figure hall,that may see the very many celebrity's wax figure.
Evening, I go to Nanya Island to eat the seafood, very fresh listensto that seafood to be sweet.
Sunday, also is I keeps Hong Kong last day.
Early morning, I hoped may go to the rice Guangdong nature protectionarea, that has very many migratory birds, I want to experience.
Then, I can go to the woman street and the garden street, I can go tothat to buy the gift for me in Australia's friend.
Evening, I can leave Hong Kong, returns to Australia.

At the Tuesday night, I'll arrived Hong Kong. After having a good dream. That'll be the beginning of the trip in Hong Kong.
On the Wednesday morning, I wish I can go to the Avenue of stars first because I want to see the mien of stars. In the afternoon, I will go to the Museum of Art to see the antiques. At thte night, I will go to the harbour city to have my dinner. After that, I will go to Lan Kwai Fong where the place is very thronged.
On the Saturday, I wish I can go to the Peak.In there, I can see the whole view of Victoria Harbour.In the afternoon, I will go to the Madame-tussaud's, I can see many waxen states of notables. After that, I will go to Lamma Island to have seafood as my dinner. Many people say that the seafood there is very fresh and tasty.
On the Sunday when is the last day of my trip in Hong Kong.
In the morning, I wish that I can go to the Mai Po where is lots of passage birds. I want to know more about them. After that, I will go to the Women's street and (花園街) to buy some souvenirs for my friends in Australia. I will leave Hong Kong at night.

Tuesday night, I arrived at Hong Kong. After I slept for a while, I began my journey in Hong Kong.
In the next morning, I hoped to go to the Road of Star because I wanted to enjoy the view.
In the afternoon, I went to HK Art Museum. At night, I went to 海港城 to have dinner, then I went to Lan Kui Fong. There are many peoply at night.
On Saturday, I hoped to go to the Peak. I could enjoy the view og Victory Harbour. In the afternoon, I went to wax museum. There are many pop star's wax there.
At night, I went to Lantau Island to eat seafood. The seafood there is very delicious.
Sunday, which is the last day that I stayed in HK, I went to Mei Po in the morning. There are many birds there. I wanted to enjoy the view of that. Then I went to the Women Street in Mong Kok. I brought presents for my friends in Australia there.
I left at night and backed to Australia

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anyway希望幫到你^^~