(十分的問題)能幫我改正以英文文章嗎?

Now, i will talk about my future job. I will be a rull time housewife. Why? It is because i hope i could do something for my family. I will cook, do housework and raise my children. I hope I will be a smart and happy housewife. Thank you!

Now, I will talk about my job, In the future, I would like to be a housewife only, reason being, I hope I can contribute something to my family. I will cook, perform all the housework duties and look after my children. Hopefully, I can be good at it. Thank you.

Now, i will talk about my job. In the future, My job will a housewife only. Why? It is because i hope i can pay for my family. In this time i will cook, do housework and look after my childrens. I hope in the future i will a clever housewift. Thank you!

這篇看來是演講詞﹐我把你的句子改寫了﹐聽起來通順一點。

Now, let me talk about my career. I believe that I will be a dedicated housewife and a mother because I am a family-oriented person, and I want to devote all my effort to my family. As a housewife, I will be responsible for household duties such as bearing and raising my children, cooking, keeping the house clean and tidy, and so on. It is my hope that I will become a smart housewife. Thank you very much.

I'm going to talk about what I would like to do as a job in the future, which is a housewife. The reason is because I wanted to contribute to my family. I will do some cooking, housework and taking care of my children. I am hoping that in the future I will be a dutiful housewife. Thank you.

PS. children是不用加"s"的, 因為children已經是雙數. child就是children的單數.

Now, i will talk about my job. In the future, My job will a housewife only. Why? It is because i hope i can pay for my family. In this time i will cook, do housework and look after my childrens. I hope in the future i will a clever housewift. Thank you!

Now, I'm going to talking about my ideal job, to be a full-time housewife soon. It is because I want to take care of my family, such as cooking, doing household work and nursing my kids. I promise I'll be a smart and great housewife. Thank you.

I'm going to talk about my (ideal) job in the future. My job will be a housewife only. Why? The reason that I choose this job (It) is because I hope I can pay and contribute to my family. (唔明你想講咩 In this time?) I will cook for my family, do housework and look after (take care of) my children. I hope I will be a clever ( and responsible) housewife in the future. Thank you!

2007-06-01 15:57:54 補充：
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