HELP我改下d文法牙題目:use youtube既好n壞

RECENTLY, student can use the NETWORK to search for information.Such as GOOGLES. GOOGLES can help them to find information in minutes.ALSO,youtube which is BOUGHT by GOOGLES, YOUTUBE is the most puplar video-sharing website. I shall DISCUSS the advantages and disadvantages of using youtube

One advantage of youtube is that it provides access to video. In the past,if people wanted to view a video.They had to go to dad (<= you mean DVD??) shop to buy it.This was A waste OF money. These days people can use youtube to watch a video clip ANYTIME.

Another advantage is that youtube upload videoS very quickly .For example,in Tai Wan when a tv program is out,in HK,it would upload at website in minuteS.



Many people were reluctant to use youtube, they said that youtube video clip sharing website IS ILLEGAL TO copyright infringement. One disadvantage of using youtube is that it would effect the market OF vcd or dvd PRODUCERS.


Another disadvantage is that many artist were reluctant to work because they had no income.as a result,we had no tv or no music in our daily life .

IN CONCLUSION ,there are abviously both advantages and disadvantages of using youtube to view a video. As a resident,i fully support the use of youtube. As a producer ,i absolutely OPPOSE TO keep using youtube