英文自我介紹 ~ 有無地方係有問題架 !! 幫我糾正下丫 ~ 唔該晒 !!

I suggest you to put your name at the beginning, after 'Good morning everybody'. Telling your name is very important, so it should be put first.

Good evening everybody, I'm a form 7A student from Man Kiu College and my name is Lai Man Wai, Erin. I am 19 years old now and I am very happy to introducing myself .I am living with my parents and an elder brother, who is an undergraduate from architecture of Chu Hai College of Higher Education.
Concerning to me, I like playing badminton as well as cooking in my leisure. I want to be a archeologist. I like reading historical and geographic writings.
Yet, I don't only read books that are related to this suject. I enjoy reading some novels and proses, as I believe that seeking a balance fantasy and logical thoughts is essential to self-development.
I wish I could achieve my goal and, at this phase, I will put rffort in my studies if I can enroll in anthropology of the Chinese University of Hong Kong, get better results and solidify my academic knowledge.
When I get in university, I will try my best to learn and improve.
My introducing is finish,Thank you.

What is rffort mean?

2007-05-29 21:13:45 補充：
sorry,'My introducing is finish,thank you.' is wrong!Please change to'thank you for attending my introduction,thank you.'OK???

Good evening ladies and gentleman....會唔會好少少?
睇下你在咩場合喇>"<

包尾 記住講 thank you for attending my introduction/ thank you.