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There wasn’t a lot of the sun today and it was rather breezy. The clubs are really heavy; I think I might rent a cart next time. I didn't play very well today because my right hand is still very sore; I couldn't swing hard enough and I couldn't even stand properly. I was depressed by this; hopefully I'll be able to do better next time in class. I don't know why I feel this, but playing in the driving range is much easier than playing a proper game. I am going to note down anything for improvement.

I think that there was not enough sun and a little bit cold today. I was tired of playing game. The clubs were heavy, so I think I'll rent a cart next time. However, I did not play well today, because my right hand hurt. Therefore, I did not swing hardly enough, my standing position was not even correct. I was upset about it. Hopefully I will play better for my next class. I don't know why I feel that playing in the driving range is easier than playing game. I am going to write down how I should improve it.