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2007-05-28 9:36 pm
I seek a position that would enable me to utilize and further develop my skills so that I would make great contributions to the company and the community. I obtain an entry-level position in a marketing firm, with prospects of moving up to higher positions and acquisition of more experience. I use my all-rounded marketing experience and strategic technique to perform innovative marketing analysis and marketing management that uplifts acquisition, retention and customer relations management.

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2007-05-28 11:17 pm
I am seeking for a position that will give me opportunities to utilize and develop my skills so that I can make contributions to the company and the community. I am now working at an entry-level position in a marketing firm which provides me with the chance to move up to higher positions and acquire more experience. I contribute to my present company by employing my all-round marketing experience and strategic technique to perform innovative marketing analysis and marketing management that uplifts the management of acquisition, retention and customer relations.
2007-05-28 10:39 pm
應該無grammar 錯
不過, 唔駛句句都咁長ga, 因為會令人睇得好辛苦
最好長短句都有.
2007-05-28 10:38 pm
I am seeking for a job that would enable me to utilize my skills to make a great contributions to the company and the community. I am working at an entry-level position in a marketing company. From this company, I learn much marketing experience and also get an opportunity to promote to a higher position. I used strategic technique to perform innovative marketing analysis and marketing management that uplifts acquisition, retention and customer relations management

中文:
我正尋求一個工作, 此工作可使我能夠利用我的技能對公司和社區做出大的貢獻的。 我正在一個銷售公司的一個最低等級的位置工作。 從這家公司中,我學習了很多銷售經驗,和得到一個機會可以升級到更高的位置。 我使用戰略性技術進行革新的市場分析和銷售管理, 此管理方法是可以獲得 (uplifts acquisition)、保留和顧客關係管理。
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2007-05-28 10:03 pm
I seek a position that would enable me to utilize and further develop my skills so that I would make great contributions to the company and the community. I obtain an entry-level position in a marketing firm, with prospects of moving up to higher positions and acquisition of more experience. I use my all-rounded marketing experience and strategic technique to perform innovative marketing analysis and marketing management that uplifts acquisition, retention and customer relations management.


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