grammar problems.Urgent!!(20 points)

2007-05-27 2:07 pm
what grammar problems and word choices problems do they have?

g. Ms Joey Williams, our beautiful consultant, will advise you on your plan.
h. The most efficient assembly-line design is a unidirectional flow.
i. Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least a week in advance of the start of the course.
j. Indentification passes must be worn at all times in offices and production facilities showing the employee's picture.

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2007-05-27 3:32 pm
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g. Ms Joey Wiliams, our beautiful consultant, will provide some suggestions on your plan.
h. The most efficient assembly-line design is a indirectional flow.
i. Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least a week before the start of the course.

j. Indentification passes must worn at all times in offices and sho the employees' picture for production facilities.
參考: myself
2007-05-28 5:21 am
g. Ms Joey Williams, our beautiful consultant, will advise you on your plan.
**preposition: Ms. Joey Williams, our beautiful consultatn, will advise you *of* your plan.

h. The most efficient assembly-line design is a unidirectional flow.
**preposition: The most efficient assembly-line design is *in* a unidirectional flow.

i. Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least a week in advance of the start of the course.
**use of English: Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least *one week before the starting* of the course.

j. Indentification passes must be worn at all times in offices and production facilities showing the employee's picture.
**Consider this: The *identification pass with the employee's photo* must be worn at all times in offices and production facilities.

Thank you for asking such difficult questions. I do spend a while to think what should be corrected or improved.
2007-05-27 8:40 pm
g Our beautiful consultant, Ms Joey Williams, will help you on your plan
.....................................will give you some advise on the plan

h. The most efficient assembly line is the direct flow design.

i. Please forward your application to the Human Resources department at least a week before the course start.

j. Pictured identification pass must be worn at all times within the plant areas/premises.
2007-05-27 3:48 pm
g. Ms Joey Williams, our beautiful consultant, will give some advise to your own plan.

h. The most efficient assembly-line design is a unidirectional flow. ( Correct)

i. Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least a week of the start of the course in advance.

j. Indentification passes must be worn at all times in the offices and show the employee's picture to the production facilities.


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