what grammar problems and word choices problems do they have?
g. Ms Joey Williams, our beautiful consultant, will advise you on your plan.
h. The most efficient assembly-line design is a unidirectional flow.
i. Please send your application form to the Human Resources Unit at least a week in advance of the start of the course.
j. Indentification passes must be worn at all times in offices and production facilities showing the employee's picture.