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Dear Hele Huo,
It's great to have an opportunity to meet you on last Tuesday,
CHANGE TO: It was a precious opportunity to meet you last Tuesday.
as you might knew , we couldn't to cooperate with you on the project of "DPF Wood Frame"
CHANGE TO: As you know, we could not cooperate in the project of " DPF Wood Frame"
due to the price we quoted was coundn't meet your target which you're buying.
CHANGE TO: since our suggested price was unable to meet your purchasing target.
However, this was a chance to know each other(correct)
and hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate with other projects in near future.
CHANGE TO: And hope we'll have more opportunities to cooperate in other projects in the nearest future.
To know more our company , you're welcome to visit our website at
CHANGE TO: If you are interested to know our company further, you are welcome to visit our website at....
2007-05-26 12:24:38 補充:
我用了‘in the nearest future’和加了‘If you are interested’,是想增加熱誠的語氣,不知適用與否,hope I can help!