英文改正....英文高手請進(續)

The Indians felt happy because he had a goat for dinner, he maybe used the old tiger-skin made a fur gave his wife.I like this most because this is extremely interesting. According to this story, tigers are strong animals but it has heart disease.
therefore we must eat more vegetables with a meal and I have to diligent in learning for English.

the INDIAN felt happy because he HAD a goat for dinner, he MAY USE the old tiger-skin TO make a FUR AND GAVE IT TO his wife, I FIND this part extremely interesting 。 According to this story ,tigers are strong animals but THEY HAVE heart DISEASES
Therefore we must EAT more vegetables and I have DIIGENCE in learning English 。
有些英文字是多餘的....自己細心觀察.....
有些刪掉的原因是文章毫不流暢....

the INDIAN felt happy because he HAD a goat for dinner AND he MIGHT USE the old tiger-skin TO make a FUR FOR his wife, I THINK this part is extremely interesting. According to this story ,tigers are strong animals but THE TIGER IN THE STORY HAD A heart disease.
Therefore we must ate more vegetables and I have to BE diligent in learning English.

2007-05-24 11:41:57 補充：
one more change for the last sentence.Therefore we must EAT more vegetables and I have to BE diligent in learning English.

The Indian felt happy because he has a goat for dinner. He used the old tiger-skin to make a fur for his wife. I felt this part is extremely interesting. According to this part of the story, tiger is strong animal but it has heart disease. Therefore we must eat more vegetables, and I have to diligent in learning English 。