✔ 最佳答案
㊣我改左啦~~
你要小心d眾數同單數,
而且唔好成日用同一個字眼,
會比較好,
而且小心d標點!
提你一樣野,
"but"lee個字,
最好唔好用係開頭同" , "後面,
要係中間,
如果一定要用,
就用"however",
或者用"although"個d,
如果唔係,
可能會錯grammer~
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My favorite character is Indian since he provides good services and low prices of products to clients.
He is an honest man.
Mrs. Packietide paid much money and risked killing a tiger, however, she shoot another target.
She killed a goat but the tiger died because of heart disease.
Mrs. Packietide used only one bullet killing two animals.
Although it is great, she felt joyless.