「I is middle schools students and i is a man.」我d grammer岩唔岩?

2007-05-22 12:53 am
我今年中4
我d英文幾好,但作文有d唔識,唔該幫手睇下我份 essay

我想講:

我係一個中學生,男仔黎,平時鍾意打機,媾女同串miss
我屋企大把錢,多到穿梭機都買得起2架
我d fd個個都話我靚仔,同我做fd好開心

咁我英文就係咁寫:

I is middle schools students and i is a man.I is likes play the pc game,
meet girls and spell the miss,I home have a lot money,money is more
to buy 2 universe ship,I friends all says i am handsome guys,with i do
friends is happy

我有無任何野錯,唔該睇睇

回答 (4)

2007-05-23 4:45 pm
全對,有100分
這是經典的潮童英文
你的 "I is middle schools students and i is a man." 跟潮童語錄的 "I is自戀狂" 一脈相承, 絕對符合語文規範
參考: hkgolden, 潮童日記
2007-05-22 7:15 pm
I am a male secondary school student. I enjoy PC games, meet girls. I am so rich that I can even afford to buy two jets. My friends think I am very handsome. It will be fun to be my friends.


PS: Are you sure you will to write this in your essay???
2007-05-22 6:49 am
I am a man who is a high school student. I usually like to play the pc game, flirt with girls and insult miss. My family has a lot of money, the amount of money is more than enough to buy two rockets. All my friends say that I am a handsome guy, being a friend of mine is always happy.


唔係 I is - 係 I am
don't translate word by word, cause sometimes you need to check the correct form. proofread it yourself to see does it make sense.
Essay usually has 5 paragraphs, this is more likely a biography of yourself
參考: myself
2007-05-22 1:04 am
gramma錯哂...
應該係"I am a middle school's student and I am a man."

中文:
我係一個中學生,男仔黎,平時鍾意打機,媾女同串miss
我屋企大把錢,多到穿梭機都買得起2架
我d fd個個都話我靚仔,同我做fd好開心

英文:
I am a middle school's student and i am a boy. I enjoy spending my time playing on computer games, get to know girls and being disrespectful to my teacher. My family is so wealthy that we can afford to buy two or more aeroplanes. All my friends said that I am fit and was glad to be my friend.
參考: 自己


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