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About the library most of them thought the quantity of the books and the service need to be improved, and also 17% and 25% thought a great variety of magazines and updated materials also need to be increased.
In the computer room, most of the students thought there should be more computers and the internet connection should be faster. 21% of them thought the software need to be updated and some students wanted to add more notebook computers.

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According to the survey, most of the STUDENTS prefer that the quanity of books and the services are needed to be improved. Moreover, there are 17% and 25% students think that variety of magazine and updated materials are needed to be increased RESPECTIVELY.

Regarding the computer room, most of the students prefer to have more computers and speedy internet connection. 21% of them think that the softwares are needed to be updated and some students want to have more notebooks installation.

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Most of them agreed that the quantity of the book and the service are needed to improve. 17% and 25% of interviewers thought that the variety of magazines must be increased and the materials are also needed to be updated.
For the computer room, most of the students thought that there should be more computers and the internet connection speed should be upgraded. 21% of them regarded that the software was needed to be updated and some students wanted more notebook computers.

圖書館大多數考慮數量書和服務需要被改進，並且有17%和25%雜誌想法品種并且更新了材料也需要被增加。
在計算機室，大多學生被認為那裡應該是更多計算機，并且互聯網連接應該是更加快速的。 21%他們想法軟件需要被更新和有些學生想增加更多筆記本計算機。