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The Olympic Games will inaugurate in year 2008in Beijing. This is the first time to hold in China,so all chinese are spirited into preparing work.
The Olympic torch has started,many famous people had joined this blessed journey.There will have 44 cities and 22 countries join the game,it must be a wonderful show.

There will have five Olympic Mascots in this time , Fuwa huanhuan,Fuwa jingjing,Fuwa beibei,Fuwa yingying and Fuwa nini, I like the most among them is nini because his bird pattern on his head is very cute and his body colour is green,it make me very comfortable when I stare at him,and the red one huanhuan is also not bad, he is the most cool one among them,because he is very colourful, you would filled spirit when you look at him, I think if the sportsman look at him during the match,they may win the game more easy.

To tell the truth, I really want to go to the Game in 2008,but in that year, I have an important exam,so I can't go there, I am not just going to play, I have other though, I need take many famous athelte's own signature,by the way, I also can walk on the Great Wall,and climb to the top of many famous hill,not only these, I want to eat all of the foods in the whole city, go around all the beautiful place, yes, this is my dream! Not is my dream,and the slogan of this Olympic Games"One world One Dream".