is that right in grammar?

2007-05-20 8:56 pm
It can attract more customers to go to enjoy the water sport activities with family and friends.Sai Sha water sport centre try to decrease their price. It can attract more customers because the lower costs. They affect the customer choices and to build to the long-term performance. They provide their activities news to the media rather than do advertising. As people playing the water sport activities and the media will take videos and photos. the media will plant the news in magazine.

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2007-05-21 5:35 am
It can attract more customers to go to enjoy the water (sports) activities with (their families) and friends.Sai Sha water (sports) centre try to decrease their price. It can attract more customers because (of) the lower costs. They affect the (customers') choices and build (up) the long-term performance. They provide their (activities') news to the media rather than (advertisements). As people playing the water (sports) activities(,) the media will take videos and photos. The media will plant the news in magazine.
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2007-05-20 9:02 pm
the media will plant the news in magazine.
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