請幫我翻譯一段英文,想叫鄰居音樂開小聲點

先生/小姐 您好
Hi! Sir/ Miss,

很抱歉,因為最近晚上都聽到您的音樂放的相當大聲
I'm sorry to write this letter to you suddenly, is just that this few days your music volume had been too loud!


整層樓都聽的相當清楚,所以,如果您不介意的話
the whole building could hear it, clearly, so if you don't might

想麻煩您看是否可以在夜間,將音量調小聲些
I would like to ask you...during the night times, could you just turn the volume lower, PLEASE!

謝謝您的配合
Thank you for your cooperating and understanding!

先生/小姐 您好
Dear sir / miss

很抱歉,因為最近晚上都聽到您的音樂放的相當大聲
Sorry for suddenly write this letter to you . In this few day at night (要說清楚是晚上) , yours music volume turn too loud .
整層樓都聽的相當清楚,所以,如果您不介意的話
Whole floor could hear yours music clearly .
So , Would (比could, can較為有禮貌 ) you mind

想麻煩您看是否可以在夜間,將音量調小聲些
to turn it volume lower please ?

謝謝您的配合
thanks for helping and understanding

To whom it may concern
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing in regard to the volume of the music that you played at night. Recently,it has been pretty loud and the whole floor could clearly hear it.
Could you please turn it down a bit in the evenings? Your corporation would be deeply appreciated.
Regards,
XXX

Dear who concerns,
Excuse me.
Your music seems to be pretty loud at night recently.
The whole building can hear it very clearly.
So if you don’t mind.
Can you please turn down your music at night?
Thank you for your cooperation!

Gentleman/young lady hello was sorry very much, because recently
evening all heard the quite loud entire level building which put to
yours music all to listen to be quite clear, therefore, if you did not
mind wanted to trouble you to look whether was allowed in at night, to
move the volume low voice thank you the coordination