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Look! It's cloudy, I think it will rain later.
So, let's go to the Great Sport Center and do some exercise after work. Don't you think this is a good idea! And I think we all need to play a sport, rather it's running, hiking or playing tennis, the main point is that exercising is good for the body and the mind! For those of us who work, it can also helps us to relax after a long day of work, so we can feel refresh and recharge. Don't you think it's true?

Look! It's cloudy. I think it is going to rain. So, we had better go to the sport centre for some indoors exercises. It's a great idea to do exercise after work, our bodies and minds will get recharged. Pick your favorite sports, keep a 30minutes exercise at least everyday. You will see you are becoming healthier and stronger! Come on! Let's do it right now!

Look! It's cloudy. I think it is going to rain. So, let's go to a big sport centre to do some exercises. Doing exercises after work is an excellent ideal. By the way, I do think you all need some sports. Just pick up any kind of sports you are interested in to start with, then you will find the benefit of keeping your body moves. The main point is, exercising is good for our health. Isn't it?

1. Look! It is cloudy, I think it will rain later.
2. So, let's go to the Great Sport Centre doing some exercises after work, it is the best idea! And I think all of you need some sports. And the main point is ...Exercise is good for health! Is it true?

look! It's cloudy now, I think it's going to be raining.
So,Let's go to great sport centre to do some exercise.
I think doing some exercise after work is the best idea as you all need sport.
And the main point is .... that exercise is good for health!Am i right?