有冇人可以 help 我睇睇 D文法有冇問題呀! 好急呀我!

In the Sport Center, we can play any sport, otherwise, we also can have our dinner inside the sport center. I know they are doing a buffet in the Sport Center Cafe: roast beet, soup, salad, roast duck , noodles, fried rice, ice cream, pizza, soup noodles, seafood, mousse cake, etc. My goodness, those delious foods make me so hungry.

So we can eat dinner there after we have done some exercise.
That sounds good!

* You get some misspelled words, and some mistake in grammer. Otherwise, I add some words to it make sounds better, if you don't mind.

We don't only play sport in the Sport Center, we can also have dinner there! I know they are doing a buffet in the Sport Center's cafe. Roast beet, soup, salad, roast duck, noodles, fried rice, ice cream, pizza, soup noodles, seafood, mousse cake....gee, that makes me hungry just thinking about all these.

So now we can eat dinner there after we've done some exercise.
That sounds good, doesn't it?

In the sport center, we don't just play sport only, also we can have dinner inside!
I know the buffet in the sport centre provides coffee, roast beef, soup, salad, roast duck, noodles, fried rice, ice-cream, pizza, soup noodles, seafood, mousse cake and so on. Those made me feeling hungry.
So, we can have dinner there after we did some exercise.
That sounds good!


2007-05-17 23:48:21 補充：
想問你幾年班呀？好多基本文法錯晒,有串錯字,d 英文簡直係廣東話化晒.我無刻意去改你內容,由得你直譯,咁先似係你寫....比心機學啦.