help.....同我睇下有咩錯.....

I looked sadly at the pile of slippers. I was surprised to see that my dog was fetching me a pile of slippers while I was working. I put them back to the original positions and patiently teach my dog again how to choose my pair of slippers.

Finally, now I retuen home from school, and my dog always fetch me the correct pair of slippers.

2007-05-14 18:57:10 補充：
sorry I made a mistakeit should beI put them back to their original position and patiently taught my dog again... etc

I looked sadly at the pair of slippers.
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I was surprised to see my dog fetching me a pile of slippers while I was working.
to後面跟infinitive
see後面用gerund

I paid more patience to teach my dog how to choose a pair of slippers for me.
patience(耐性)(n)
patient(耐性)(adj)
patient(病人)(n)

my dog could choose the correct slippers for me all the time.

I looked sadly at the pile of slippers. I
=>was
surprised to
=>see
my dog was
=>fetching
me a pile of slippers while I’m working. Then, I put them back to
=>the
original places and I
=>paid
more
=>patience in teaching
my dog how to choose me a
=>pile
of slippers.

Finally, when I
=>return
home from school, my dog can choose the correct slippers for me all the time.