[急]英文project講稿~~!!

Translation of your speech (演講) as below:
In this questionnaire (問卷) interview, we would like to know different ranges of age Hong Kongers how to comment (評價) Hong Kong ' s transportation industry through the investigation (調查). Hence (因此), we have divided (劃分) them into 4 age groups accordingly. Let ' s have a look of the illustration (圖解), there are 37% rate of the ages between 19 to 25, 32% between 26 to 35, 18% under 18 and 13% over 36.
Here, we have elaborated (精心策劃) the repliers (回答者) being a half as local people and another half as the foreigners. In this case, we can collect a comparatively (較為) overall (全面的) data (數據) so as to avoid from any biased (偏頗的) opinions. In accordance with these data, we do accomplish (完成/實現/達到) the terms at this point in which their nationalities (國籍) are exactly fifty-fifty (各半).
Nowadays, the transportation system has a particularly (尤其) significant (具有重要意義) status (地位) in the world. We exercise (使用) the operation (運作) with 90% opportunity daily. Obviously (顯然), we can find out the evidences herein (此中). As a matter of fact (事實上), all the repliers make use (利用) of their country ' s or city ' s transportation while none of them is a exception (例外). Therefore (所以), it is considerably (非常) vital (重要的) for a city of running (運轉/管理) a transportation system in a smooth (暢順的) way. To say (可以說), it can influence (影響) the economy scheme (經濟體系) and the routine living for people in the whole country or city.

2007-05-13 22:55:54 補充：
In the last paragraph at the 1st line, it should be:Nowadays, the transportation system has a ......(Not knowing how comes appearing as some weird (古怪的) characters.)P.S. Better to use present & present perfect tense for the whole passage.

In this time asked in the volume visit, we hoped penetrates the visit disparity in age the participant, knew they opinion and feeling which transport to Hong Kong. Therefore we divided into them 4 different age groups to leave, was allowed to see from the chart, center have not accounted for 37% in 19-25 year old of this group, center have not accounted for 32% in 26-35 year old of this group, this group center have not accounted for 18% below 18 years old, but or above this group center have not accounted for 13% in 36 years old. In this time asked in the volume visit, we hoped the native and foreigner's participant population is respectively occupies one half, like this we only then may collect a more comprehensive data, cannot be partial to some side. Sees from the chart, our this also achieves this spot, the native and foreigner's participant population all is 50%. In the nowadays world, the transportation system has occupied the very important status, we every on first all can have 9 tenths opportunities to be able to use, but attempts our us all to be allowed to see this fact, all participants can use the transportation system in theirs national/city, does not have a person is exceptional. Therefore if a city has a good transportation system the speech, is extremely important, it has affected the entire national/city economical system and people's daily life.