南華早報 scmp 的尼篇英文報導有冇grammar的錯誤

2007-05-11 8:47 am

唔知道點解, 我覺得好尼篇英文報導內容的grammar好有問題:

Elderly people are being encouraged to practise tai chi after a study showed it can reduce their chances of falling and suffering an injury.

Between April 2005 and March last year, hospital admissions of elderly people as a result of falls accounted for 300,000 bed-days in public hospitals, or 3.8 per cent of inpatient services....

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更新1:

網址: http://hk.news.yahoo.com/070508/187/270u o.html 要24小時之後先可以選出你為最佳答案, hitwin等等啦

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winwin

2007-05-11 8:56 am

✔ 最佳答案

話時話丫, 真系有問題呀.. 我O向另一個問題都有答到.
http://hk.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/?qid=7007051100086

而且, AFTER前又唔加(,), 咁會CONFUSE左.
再提, 唔系THEIR CHANCES vs AN INJURY.

*P.S. CLICK唔到個YAHOO NEWS web site呀.. 希望我答到你啦..

參考: my knowledge + I speak english everyday..

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用戶9600

2007-05-12 7:39 am

I have answered the first question . Please take a look at another question you posted .

Between April 2005 and March 2006, hospital admission of elderly people who were injuried from falls accounted for 300,000 bed-days in public hospitals , or 3.8 percent of in-patient services .

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