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Dear all,
Just a quick note to introduce myself, I am the new merchandiser (in the purchasing department 這些字全拿開,只有採購部門才用merchandiser,不用提). My name is John and I will (be in charge 拿走換上take care或 follow up) the cccount of xxx effective (from也拿走) today.
(I look forward to working with you soon and...全句拿走換上) Trust that I can get along with you all soon.
Regards!
以上是用肯定式語氣的辦公室句法。
2007-05-09 23:04:24 補充:
簡化成:Dear all,Just aquick note to introduc myself, I am the new merchandiser. My name is John and I will take of the account of xxx cCompany effective today.Regards!John
2007-05-09 23:05:57 補充:
Just a quick note (老花眼做成 typing mistake)
2007-05-09 23:09:07 補充:
introduc (也是introduce 一字由我的老花眼做成 typing mistake) sorry,cCompany (也是Company 一字由我的老花眼做成 typing mistake) sorry again
2007-05-09 23:11:23 補充:
竟然漏了一句, 又再sorry.Trust that I can get along with you all soon.Regards!
參考: my 34 years commercial experience