We should have asked the staff, if the game could run in the place. Before the running game, we should have considered our voice and motion, if we affect someone to run an activity.
The day we precede our event, we had new and precious experience about planning event. Also, we had some advantages, disadvantages, improvement about our event including pre-event, on-event and post-event. However, we can remember the mistake and improve it.
is that right in grammer?
2007-05-04 10:53 pm
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2007-05-06 9:12 pm
✔ 最佳答案
There are some grammatical mistakes, here's the modified version:We should have asked the staff, if the game could run in the place. Before the running of the game, we should have considered our voice and motion, if we affect someone to run an activity.
The day we precede our event, we had new and precious experience about planning an event. Also, we had some advantages, disadvantages and improvement about our event including pre-event, on-event and post-event. However, we can learn from the mistakes and make improvement.
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