is that grammer right ?

It should be: we are not right to choose that place to run the game. We saw the game very attractive to participant and they enjoy the game very much, so we will not cancel the game and we really run out mant times. We also saw participants waiting impatiently for us to find out a suitable place and we do not want participants to feel bad because they do not play the game.

嗯，首先我想問係一個ｅｖｅｎｔ有好多ｇａｍｅｓ，定係就咁一個ｇａｍｅ而已？我睇你其他問題入面好似係前者多，但係以你呢度黎睇係就咁一個ｇａｍｅ，我當係一個ｇａｍｅ咁寫啦

同埋這件事應該係過去了吧？我用過去式寫

唔好介意我rephase得太多：

We made a mistake for choosing that place where we run the game. We could tell the game was popular since the participants were enjoying it very much. In response to that, we did not put a halt to the game until it finished even though we were running out of time. Nevertheless, we also noticed how impatient the participants were. They waited for us to look for a suitable place in order to run the game. Failing to do so would mean they would not get to play the game and we did not want to disappoint them.

註：
我唔明點解你話cancel個game，你既意思係話玩到無時間，但係唔cancel個game？你係咪想講玩到冇晒時間，但係唔想中斷個game呀？個game未開始既話就應該講cancel，開始左就應該話中斷，咁究竟你個game係開始左定係未開始？我上面當你係開始左，玩到冇時間但係冇中斷個game

其實我想問點解你一開始講你搵錯地方，跟住又講唔想因為超時而停止個game，但係最尾又講返搵地方既事？唔係應該將搵錯地方同搵地方既事放埋一齊講，跟住先再話唔想停止隻game因為超時咩？

最尾個短句：we do not want participants feel bad because they do not play the game. 你既意思係：”我地唔想parts覺得唔開心因為佢地冇玩隻game”…但係我諗你意思係：”我地唔想parts因為冇玩隻game而唔開心” 吧？並唔係　因為”佢地冇玩”，所以你地就”唔想…”，換句說話黎講，以你果句短句意思：如果佢地有玩，咁你地就唔理佢地開唔開心，唔知你明唔明我既意思

唔明既請再問啦