If your staff can wear uniform, their look more polite. Besides, you can set a few TV on the corner to make the atmosphere more good.
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2007-05-04 6:44 am
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2007-05-05 2:50 am
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If the staffs can wear uniforms, they look more polite. Besides,setting TV at the corner of the room. That makes the atmosphere better.
2007-05-08 5:19 pm
If your staff can dress in uniform , their will seem more respectful . Moreover , you can place a few TV at the corner to improve the atmosphere .
2007-05-08 18:35:55 補充：
Oh , sorry about the mistake . Not " their will seem more respectful " , it should be " they will seem mire respectful " .
2007-05-08 18:35:55 補充：
Oh , sorry about the mistake . Not " their will seem more respectful " , it should be " they will seem mire respectful " .
2007-05-04 6:56 am
If your staff wear uniform, they will look more polite. Besides, installing few television sets in the corners enhances the atmosphere.
OR Besides, you can install a couple of television sets in the corners for having a better atmosphere.
OR Besides, you can install a couple of television sets in the corners for having a better atmosphere.
參考: meee
2007-05-04 6:49 am
If the staffs can wear uniforms, they look more polite. Besides, you can put a few TV sets on the corner of the room. That makes the atmosphere better.
參考: my own!!
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