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2007-05-03 11:58 pm
I would recommend Bookworm as its dishes are healthier than others. Moreover it has a lot of different kind of dishes to select. Some families which have children can get a lot of space to play.
註 我見議 Bookworm(餐廳)因為它的菜餚較健康.而且 它有地方和玩具給小朋友玩.

有更好的修詞 請幫忙加以糾正 thank you ..

回答 (5)

2007-05-04 12:13 am
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I would " propose " Bookworm as its dishes are " physique " than others .
" Beside " , it has " a great many " different kind of dishes to select .
" A number of " families which have children can get "aplenty much "
space and " plaything "(toy無呢個咁好) " to amuse " .

"xxx" = 更改左既字

希望會幫到你 !
2007-05-04 12:32 am
I would like to recommend Bookworm as its dishes are healthier than others. Moreover it has a lot of different kinds of dishes to select. Some families which have children can get more spaces to play.
參考: Myself
2007-05-04 12:11 am
試下用這樣方式表達更好
I would like to recommend a restaurant called "Bookworm" their dishes are healthier, and have lot of variety to of food. If you have children, the restaurant offers a playground for their child to play with.
2007-05-04 12:07 am
Please try:
I would recommend Bookworm as they provides healthy dishes, In addition, the menu provides a wide variety of dishes to choose and it is spacious enough to let the kids to play around.

Hope this helps.
2007-05-04 12:03 am
I would recommend Bookworm as its dishes are healthier than others. Moreover, it has a lot of different kinds of dishes to choose from. Families which have children can get a lot of space to play.

我suggest最後一句改做
Children can also enjoy the spacious playing area which is packed with toys.
參考: myself


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